Crowsnest Fire Powerpoint

Changes I made to the presentation and why:

1. I added a title page and put headings throughout. With headings the readers will know specifically what each slide is about, it is more precise, and they will comprehend the information better.

2. I used consistent colour throughout. The colours of the original made it very hard to read and focus. I think it also looks more put together if it is consistent.

3. I took out some information because not all of it was really important (there were also a few spelling errors). I also put it in bullet format with shorter sentences which makes it easier for the reader and less complicating.

4. I took out the way the words came in on the second and third slides. I found that very distracting. The first one was too slow and the second one was fast and annoying I would say. It is much easier if the information is just there, easier to follow.

5. I made the font larger. The readers need to be able to easily read the information and it was not easy at all in the first presentation.